I know for a fact there are people who would care if you took your life, I can name a few off the top of my head, me being one of them

Short, simple, and to the point
5/5 :)

Well, I'm sure you know it's short so I won't state that part. xD

You did a great job with this. It's very sad, eh. And, I know there are tons of people who care about you. . . But, it's not like you'd really do it anyway. :]

But, the actual poem.
Was great, flawless.
Great emotion,
everything was just great.

:]

Keep it up darling.