Wow!!! This is truly wonderful. I loved this poem. It almost brought me to tears, and I'm not just saying that. The flow was off a little in some parts; but with the way you painted the picture of this poem, it wasn't that noticeable. This poem was very creative. It pulled me into it and held me captive. I think you did a wonderful job, but you just need to touch up a few words to make the flow better. Wonderful work though. I really think that you are going to be a great poet someday: and when it happens remember that I told you that you so first. : )

Great Job!
Letty

Great poem

5/5