Oh that was great emotions its not long enough but it really means a lot! the words epressed very well and it has a great piece of thoughts... those lines u had written was flowed well and seems so sincere! keep it up and keep on writing all what u feel 5/5

This poem is really simple but I feel the emotion and it's really well written!!! You deserve 5/5 for this!!!

5/5
Good poem
i love the lines
Like revenge is a sin
Ill smile when your in pain

Try to make paragraphs and use capitals wherever reqd.

take care,
Roxiee

Sad, yet beautiful.
Although, it's a bit confusing, and the flow was a bit off.
Good job though!
5/5

.:CiNdY:.

Aw... this is soo cute but sad... 5/5