Comments : Im not lying

  • 16 years ago

    by Aaron Deevers

    Very nicely said, I know where this comes from. In some ways I have tried to get through to someone and they never would let me. Very nicely done 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Cathy
    Excellent job on this piece. The emotion you are feeling can be felt by the reader. When we love someone so deeply it is so painful to not have our love returned in the same way.
    Take Care
    Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Elapsed

    What an absolute agonising read you have penned. The sorrow and sadness was very well expressed in this piece. Sometimes we just don't want to let go, though in the end we only hurt ourselves if we don't.