I think the whole poem is just a little too simple. Don't get me wrong, simple is sometimes good, but I think this poem is just a little too simple for the mark. The say thing with the rhymes.

Brad

I liked this. it's the same way I feel. and the feeling won't go away. =/ good stuffs.

This one was good. I love your flow of your words, very awesome. I have felt these exact words one too many times. This is cool though.