Comments : Be the best of friends..<3

  • 16 years ago

    by X l i l T a n i X

    That was a really good poem i was really touched by it, and i know how you feel.. dont worrry they will come bak n be ur friend soon

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    Awe. a very sweet poem. the wroding was nice
    and the structure was good. you captured
    the emotion in this piece very well.
    the flow was almost flawless.
    in the third stanza. if you take away "all"
    in the line "i pushed you guys :all: away"
    the flow would be back on track. :]
    anyway. still, a great write. 5/5.