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  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, wow, wow...
    This is one of the most amazing friendship poems I've read in a while...
    Whole piece is excellent, written with amount of heartfelt emotions. Your descriptions are vivid, beautiful, and the whole piece has great flow and wording.
    Deeply touching, original piece, truly captivating
    from the first to the last line.
    I can't choose my favorite stanza, whole poem is truly great.
    You did really good job with rhymes, too.

    Keep writing, you have a way with words :)