A very nice poem. :] i liked the structure.
and the wording. flow was great and t'was
a beautiful poem. :] great write. 5/5.

Dunno, maybe, hehe, my bad. well thanks!! @.@

"You are perfect in my eyes
What I'm saying is true
I'm longing for the day
I will be perfect for you"

love that part.
what a great poem.
xx