Ohh my gosh! that was very outstanding piece! the message of this poem seems very touching piece! very well expressed and the emotions its kinda full of sincerity.. love it 5/5

That was by far the saddest poem I have ever read... there was so much emotion in this poem, and your message was so powerful... I really hope this poem isn't true... This piece was very well done! Keep up the amazing work!

Omg this is so sad but a good flowing poem
i really hope it is not true

OMG, this poem is so sad. You did a great job with the poem but it is so sad and you did a great job transferring emotion into it. 5/5

Omg this poem is soo sad... :( but i love ittt!