I like the vocabulary and the quesyions you posed the in poem, but I think the flow was a little jumpy, and all the lines were different lengths. I think the poem would also look more neat and organized if you put it into stanzas instead of just all together. I like the comparison between natural earth and the media, too.

You have a very distinct voice. I really enjoyed this poem.

Oh my gosh, darling.
I love this to pieces. xD

It's amazingly written, such true meaning. And, I just love it.

At first I thought it would end all . . . I don't know. Different. but, it didn't You stayed on topic, from beginning to end.

I would paste my favorite part.
But, I'd have to pasted the entire thing, so we'll skip that part. xD

5.5

Nicely done. =)