I love this i love this i love this

Great poem, i would have never guessed its ur first! you have awsome talent!

Awsome, i totally agree that i cant believe that this is your first poem. that was so cool!!!
~DaRkAnGeL ^o^

I love your poem you are so good for a first time writer i been writing since i was little and im not really that good ur awsome!!!!!!!

Love this poem!

First time poem?!
Very good for a first. ;)
Beautifully descriptive.
Keep em' coming!
Kat xxx