HAHA! I loved it! The last line actually made me say "YES!" hahaha. But, that's cos I'm a retard. xD

I loved it I loved it I loved it.

It flowed amazingly and THE MESSAGE. was so amazing. And I loved the confidence in this; it was just so beautiful. Always have confidence in yourself & never lose it. It's the best thing you got :]

Wow...you are such a great write...
you make me look like an ameture...cuz i am one :)

but like i said i loved it....one of the reasons i added u to favorites ur poems r awesome ^_^

Great flow, the structure is kinda funky though