Wow this is deep. that first verse was deep also. at lest in my opinion. wonderful story though and its told well and kept in poetic form. im sorry for what ya went through though. keep writing.

Love it!!
Can heaps majorly relate;
Spesh bout the part about forgetting and ignoring.... Im trying to do that at the moment... Made a new hotmail account lol

Hmmm; 5/5

Omg this was amazing. I just went through this whole shit load of an ordeal and I feel this way exactly! this poem helped me realize a lot of things. Thank you so much for writing it. You've got extreme talent.

Everynight I lay awake,
Sleeping's so hard to do.
I know to you, I'm a mistake,
But yet I can't stop loving you.

^^^ this is the stanza that stood out to me the most. It caught my attention and i just cldnt stop reading. plz check out some of my work 5/5
kat

I think the last line was the best.
That line, ftw, totally.