I would say it's really moving, i respect people who appreciate their friends and admit of their own mistakes when they did it.

"But you forgave me,
When I was feeling alone,
You have such a big heart,
And not one made of stone."
i liked this part most

Written about someone i dont know but well written enough for me to still understand, gd job :)

You're right in a sense i can see you had a bit of trouble getting it out how you wanted to .. however i think the elemental aspect really added to the power.. and i loved it

Great work.. and i understand where you are coming from when you say that it is hard to get your real feelings out, but i think that you did a pretty good job through this piece...but you can also tell that it could have used a little more emotion...but its not a horriable poem, it is actually pretty good! Keep it up! :D

Friends are the best. it is nice that they can be so forgiving. that is what truely makes a good friend!
my only thought is that
"And hoped everyday,
Ahat our friendship never ends."

it should be
"And hoped everyday,
That our friendship never ends.

you mispelled one word.
ugh, typos.

5/5

I like it cause i could see everything in front of my eyes.a moving picture.
5/5.
though you can improve.