Aww this so sad i know how it feels to have your heart broken ...but besides that its a great poem!

I liked the title, while the little heart thing threw me off again. Lol. Anywho...the overall peice was sad and the emotions expressed were real. Your flow was smooth. Great job :]]

I liked the title, while the little heart thing threw me off again. Lol. Anywho...the overall peice was sad and the emotions expressed were real. Your flow was smooth. Great job :]]

This sounds more like a letter than a poem. but it was still very enjoyable. i can relate to it which sometimes can be good in poetry, but for a story like this, no one should be able to relate to it, no one should have to write it.
5/5
amazing

This was beautifully written. I love your style always have. I'm sorry that thats a true story that should never happen. But in time you will find the perfect guy. One who will never hurt you just hold on and you will get there.

"I look back
at all the memories
me and you share
and it kills me"

These lines reminded me of a love I once had. Your thoughts very deep and beautiful in this. another 5 from me.

Absolutely amazing, doll! sooo soo beautiful. i love your work. i love the part about how you will let him be with another if it makes him happy. even tho it breaks you. you must really really love him.

Wow great poem... i can relate to this poem...