Comments : Time To Fly (collab with End Of Eternity)

  • 16 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Hey Cindy,

    Glad to have one more together, its still like the first time experience & i just loved it.

    Merging souls for eternity
    Sunshine and warmth await you here
    Your heart is always safe with me
    My soul alive when you are near

    Lovely stanza, you simply put soul in poem with your words.

    all the best and take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Hello dear ones,

    What a beauty! You two are so in tune with eachother.... It reminds me a little of the poem a made a few days ago! Haha!!

    Love to you both,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by ben thompson

    Beautiful write cindy. very well done.

  • 16 years ago

    by moonlil

    Excellent poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by NEIL MUNRO

    Had me hooked from start to finish. i look forward to more

  • 16 years ago

    by Lithium

    Thats a lovely piece full of love and peace great job guys xox sam

  • 16 years ago

    by JEFF

    If i was given the chance to have a super power it would be the ablity to fly. most everyone wants this abilty, but for different reasons. And is one of the best :) Great write 5/5