Comments : Ironic...

  • WOW, what a story... sorry you had to go through this... I hope you manage to get him back one day. I'm always here to talk if you need someone... Great poem though! You did a great job, flawless :) 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    WOW is right.. This must have been devastating and stressful. Two things I can understand.
    Very heartfelt 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Ixora

    Aw wow hun that was an unexpected ending..still i think i just got a favorite quote..for some reason this line hit me hard:
    "he told her to protect her heart"

    && i dont think it was too long..it was perfect, length never matters its the words that do.

    *^*crow*^*

  • 16 years ago

    by MEMI

    Wow thats good and deep

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Dear Tabi,

    Your poems always have a real story in it. I love how you always mould it into a beautiful poem!
    The message here is clear: to always follow your own heart and I think you are 100% right!
    Great job and great message!

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid