Comments : Affair

  • 16 years ago

    by Eclipse

    WOW! A rhyming poem.
    Don't come across those too often under your name.
    I'm used to your poems not having that much/no rhyme so I'm contemplating whether I like that or not.
    I shall give you my answer sometime later but i SHALL give you an answer.

    - Eclipse.....

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Effective piece. The flow is flawless and you did great job with rhymes, avoided to sound too typical. I like the format of this poem and it is written greatly with a lot of originality.
    I can relate to this in a way.
    You truly have a way with words :)

    Keep up!