Comments : Everything Is Gone

  • 16 years ago

    by QuietDreamer

    Haiku's are also suppose to paint pictures in the readers head which i think you executed well. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Christina

    Wow very short!! but very well.....i just got down having to do one of those at school lol!!!

    <3 i love you silly

  • 16 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    I usually am not into haikus, but this one. i loved it! i think it is amazing how you implied, that even though clouds are gone, sunshine will still disappear.
    5/5