by Chelsey
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I know you don't want short comments. |
by Sweet lig
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Wow it really made me smile in the last stanza's very surprising thoughts... but the whole lines was absolutely great and powerful.. nice asking those sweet and lovely words... 5/5 |
by JustKristina
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Awesome Poem! I loved it! I loved how it showed that all you want in a relationship is trust. It also protrayed that you want someone to look past you words and give you what you truly want. Wonderful work! I loved it! keep it up! :D |
by janiL
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Love! =D |