Very nice. I really enjoyed this one. i t was very heartfelt I give it a 5/5

Alexandra

Nice poem! great job! keep up the good work! Janaynay

OHH i love this! wonderful! it gave me the butterflies just reading it.. i loved it so much! you had such wonderful rhyming and flow! And it is truly heartfelt. Wonderful poem once again! keep it up! :D

This was a wonderful poem full of love for this guy, how you feel for this guy is obvious. you trully love him, well done.

5/5 david

Wow
this is good
rhyme good
everything was great
usually im not into these poems
but this one wasnt cheesy or dirty
in anyway it was about love
5/5
kaila

Love just flowed arousing love.
great work .it takes an exclusive art to write such poems and people refrain writing xplicit.you have been just.
5/5

Good poem. Just one pitfall. Some of your rhymes are off. I think if you fix them this poem could be a lot better. Other than that it's great. 5/5 from me.