Wow this is such a strong poem, i really like the way you can picture her in your minds eye...5/5 good job

This is literally one of the best poems I have ever read. I agree with one of the other comments, You can really picture her in your mind. That is always a plus for me when you can visualise a story being told.
5/5

This poem is amazing!!

I love this poem, like the others stated you can really see her in your mind its great visual imagery.

I enjoyed reading this poem and liked that you could describe her so perfectly. overall i love this poem.