Interesting write, creative and different from anything I've read before. I like the metaphor of circles.
Nicely written poem.
Well done!

Awww thats so sweet hun 500/5 fore sure *hugs*

This poem is very good...i love how the format goes into a rhym (spellings bad) near the end, and the whole thing makes me wanna read it again, just to think more about the metaphores in it. 5/5 indeed!

That is really good, it is a new way of thinking. i would give it a 5!!!!!!!!

Its an great poem. it make me understand your pain that you are going through, and besides its areally greatly written.all i have to say to critisize it change the format.

i give it a 5/5