Heiz.. lol,, if you werent done yet,,you shouldnt have posted this poem..

its such a nice poem.. but i was very dissapointed when i saw the ending,, there was no ending,... hehe..

Another really good poem.. 5/5.. but here's me attempting criticism lol.. the soul/low and soul/goal .. it's good rhyming but idk just sounds funny.. good emotion and all that.. lol.. this might have been completely pointless..