Great poem! Filled with emotion and very heartfelt...i loved it! I couldn't even tell that this was written by 2 different people.. and that means that you did a great job!keep it up! :D

This was great! I read it on Italian Stallion's page also and I just loved it. I loved the imagery in the first stanza. It truly captured my attention and I wanted to read more. The emotions you described were real and easy for me to relate with. The flow was flawless and nothing seemed forced. Well done *5/5*

Aawwwz wat a cute poem! and different then the others ive read of yours! keep up the great work!

<3 i love you silly