Comments : When people change

  • 16 years ago

    by Birgit

    I deffinately(sp?) know the feeling! So I really can relate to this poem. The lines: Not even your eyes are the same, I think they have seen too much (might want to change the TO in TOO =P) are just beautiful.
    5/5
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  • 16 years ago

    by Perfection

    This is an excellent theme for a poem. You use nice words so you do get a message through even though you chose not to rhyme...

    Take care =)