WOW! I love this poem! it is so true!
You r one of the best

Thankyou sweetheart:) glad to hear u liked it

I do like the use of rhetoical questions but sometimes it can be used slightly do much, how about answering some of the questions because that way the reader may understand where your coming from and the message you wish to deliever. It also will add that extra bit of depth and meaning to it. xoxo