Comments : Painful thoughts of yesterday

  • 11 years ago

    by VanityIllusions2

    You really know how to express yourself,
    this is a great poem.
    And it's rhym's really well.
    you really have talent.

  • 11 years ago

    by Kaila

    This is terribly sad
    I have felt like this many times
    Its not fun at all
    again im sorry for your pain
    you are in my prayers
    this poem is so easy to follow
    and to relate with
    wonderful write
    5/5
    kaila

  • 11 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    The message specially the story was powerful and very emotional... all the words seems really has a great and deep feelings. there are some few lines that it was dedicated to me and its kinda very inspiring thoughts and very impressive as well... but i just noticed the flow was a bit off... but thought still the emotions of this poet keep shining 5/5