Wow. that was awesome. nice one.

Very passionate for someone so young. Keep writing. You've got a great tallent starting to burst out.

Great poem!!

Beautiful poem. you are so pure and passionate!!! can't wait to see more. <3

Beautiful poem. it's so full of emotion. i love it.
keep writting

SO full,
SO alive,
Keep on writting,
work like this you will go so far,
((5))

Awwww i love this poem!!!! 5/5!!! so ficking sweet!! XD