Comments : Falling Once More

  • 15 years ago

    by Arun Khan

    This was such a sweet poem.. really liked the calm way you presented it.. 5/5.
    keep writing!
    Regards arun.

  • 15 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    Oh that was so sweet and full of love. The rhyme and flow of the poem was great. These were my favorite lines:

    "Im falling again
    A deep sleep tonight
    One thing on my mind
    With no will to fight"

    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by iFallToPieces

    Really sweet poem, wonderful 5/5