Comments : Prophecy

  • 16 years ago

    by Elapsed

    An absolute beautifully piece of writing!!.. The heartache and pain was felt the whole way through..

    "But when that time comes around I hope
    that you'll still remain my friend."

    Such simple words with many layers of meaning!!.. deep and powerful emotions very well expressed in the poem... very easy to relate to.. an awesome job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Kelvin Masi

    A beautiful peace of work Jenna, this poem is awesome i like it, just keep on shining cause your the best!! keep it up 5/5