Comments : The lines in your heart are only a speck.

  • Absolutely wonderful read, baby girl. Great flow in it too and very relatable for me. I really like the last stanza...

    Demons can laugh and God can cry out in pain,
    but I'll still sit there in loneliness, edging insane.
    My mind may fight back the tears I shall cry,
    yet I'll never forget you somehow made me try.

    Write writting.... 5/5 as always

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    A stupendous write. a very relateable poem
    to many, i would say, especially me. :] the
    title itself deserves a 5/5.! lol. the flow was
    really flawless and the rhyme was perfect.
    my favorite stanzas were the first and last.
    simply.. an unbelievably incredible poem! 5/5.