Comments : A friend

  • 14 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    This poem is very sweet and very much true =] Everyone likes to have close friends and im sure this is how most people feel about them - Great job!

  • 14 years ago

    by Obscura

    This is a really good poem the structure is great within it i liked the similes in it it really outlined the close bond of friendship between two people strange choice of words though but strange does not mean bad the rythem is good aswell but you do not have any periods in it or capital letters except at the start but other than that well done

    well done