Thats dam right! i loved it too, wow it was great. :D the meaning was awesome and the love from you two girls is not disputable...

l o v e i t! ! 5/5 david

"I look forward to that single day" = "I look forward to that ONE day"
~for sake of the flow

"So I can finally be in your arms" = "When I can finally be in your arms" ~again, for sake of the flow (then again, I may have the flow wrong)

Okay, well, punctuation is a must. Umm, the flow was very wishy washy, and I think you should have fixed it before posting it, but it still is a swell poem.
Well done, especially for a collaboration =]

5/5
~Stephen White

I like this poem but in a way it makes me sad because i know wat its like to have a long distance relationship and miss someone so much. At least he is back now... anyways i give it a 10/10

Cheers

So, I am not a big fan of typical love poetry and I like some parts of this piece, others don't.
First stanza grabbed my attention, very interesting, nice start, filled with feelings that you expressed on a good way.
Second stanza somehow didn't kept my attention, I don't like choice of words in it and I think that you can say same thing on more powerful and unique way.
Third stanza is again great with strong, clearly described emotions.
I don't like fourth stanza, your repetition of word-charm- totally throw me off and I just don't like the flow of it.
Ending is fine, touching I suppose, and it has excellent tone.
All in all this isn't a bad poem, and I am just honest and I am telling my opinion, it just didn't impressed me to much.