I loved this poem and i liked the way it flows,keep writing 5/5 ;)

Wow! Amazing poem, very unique and I admire the way you wrote it, your choice of words is also great and you created truly captivating atmosphere mixed with excellently expressed emotions.
Very dark and intense piece, well done, I enjoyed in every line.

This is awesome so descriptive

A little long I think but then I like the shoter forms otherwise a good read.