Comments : Silently dying

  • 16 years ago

    by FountainsOfBlood

    Very good, well done XD
    5/5 xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Finding myself

    I can relate to this poem

  • This poem is perfectly fitting to me right now. I felt that exact way just yesterday. Good work on the poem, the flow was decent and you can feel the emptiness comming from the lines of it.

  • 16 years ago

    by HidinVictim

    I really like this and the flow is amazing, i can really relate too. beautifully written and so emotional... 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Katie

    I like your word flow. One can relate to this. Even though I know the emotions, I feel distant from them too since it's vague.