Wow that is alot to say but it was really good

Wow...
The emotions expressed from the first to the last stanza are so intense, overwhelming. Whole poem is excellently written and deeply touching, it brought tears to my eyes.
Originality of the whole piece is amazing along with good flow and fantastic ending.
My favorite stanza is:

-Let's pretend that we cared
that we told her we were here
and that she always had our shoulders
and had a beautiful reflection in the mirror-

Keep up!
5/5 from me

Such an exquisite poem has yet to be written. Great job. 5/5

Nice poem...

Wow;; i havee missed readding your writing so so much.
you are truly an amazing writer.
imy tons<33

ps. my myspace kept getting hackked :/
sorrry.

ttyl lizzipop.

pss. the hobos wont leave my house!!