"As the tear drops fall
The reflection hides
Forming water colors
Of the left behind"
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This is my favorite stanza because for some odd reason it held a certain meaning to me.

The poem was very original.
It was a great way to look at a tear drop if you ask me. 5/5

This is so unique. I've never read something like this. Truly powerful poem, filled with emotions expressed on interesting and original way. Effective from the beginning to the end. The repetition is quite effective, too.
My favorite stanza is;

-As the tear drops fall
The smiles fade
Forming water colors
Of the daze-
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Greatly expressed...

Excellently done!
5/5 from me

Your poets heart unfurls itself willingly and lends its words to us to float and drift among our own words. Good work, I enjoyed your poem and look forward to more.