My favourite stanza:
"In his hands
He holds my heart
With the power to heal
But will it fall apart?"

i truely loved this poem.

forgiving is for the strong,
but you must never forget.

5/5.

Keep up the good work.
Maybe it wont fall apart.
Love hurts i know.

Good poem, its sweet.
It flowed well and the message was clear.
I'm sure he would loved it.
5/5

Nice job! I loved the emotions you wrote with ... everything felt so real and from the heart. I could relate with most of what you said therefore I truly enjoyed myself.

"My bad habit has stopped
But the scars still remain
His gorgeous green eyes
Are all that keeps me sane"
^beautiful stanza :]

well done *5/5*

Good flow in this piece as well as good rhyme. You acknowledge the good and bad to relationships on both sides. It's all about compromise, and forgiveness and love. good job!
*ME*

This was fairly long, but it kept me interested the whole time. The flow was flawless with your short lines and good rhymes. Tells a true story of love, yet with a slight bit of hesititation too. My favourite stanza would have to be the first one. I like the emotions throught this, and the imagery you created in certain parts like the third last stanza. Well done. :]

Tammie

Wonderful job
I loved the sanza that somewhat repeated
it was a nice curveball
i thought this poem was cutee
and well written
i can tell you really thought about it
5/5
kaila

I LOVE THIS POEM! I can relate to it so well!! Awesome job!!!!

Awwww.. this is a GREAT poem!! Keep up the good work! =D

=) that is very good!!!!

I love i all!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wow this is amazing the flow is great and it portrays so much emotion in each line thats read. After every stanza it kept me reading on, the image that it gives is great! Keep up the Good work! This was a great read hope to read more. Its for sure going on my favs. Well Done! :)
~*Whit*~

Brim full of emotion, brim full of hope, brim full of Love!

Brilliant!!

Wow! amazing poem x

""I know he loves me
I know it's true
There's everything to gain
But everything to lose"" This stanza has to much meaning behind it even though its only but a few lines another great poem.....5/5

Its amazing the emotion you feel. i wish you well

Wow.... i thought of something different reading this.... you came in with a curveball and i really loved it.... I love your emotion into it.... keep up the good work... and stay strong

xoxox
Jess

"He's my saving angel
Until the very end
He's not only my lover
He's my best friend"

Loved it, absolutely loved it.
<3.
This was my favorite stanza because i can relate to it.
Keep up the good work:]

--Tay

Wow, amazing poem. really, that is a great poem, wow. i dont even know what to say

Wow! great 5/5