Wow
this poem is great.
you chose the perfect words.
keep this up.

Wow...
This is so touching from the beginning to the end. Heartfelt, deep and truly greatly written piece. I can't express how much I like it- you managed to express emotions excellently in each stanza. The imagery is very vivid and portrayed on a fantastic way, it filled my mind with lively pictures.
The ending stanza is very effective, it's excellent conclusion to the expressed sadness.
Keep writing!