Intense poem, filled with amount of greatly expressed emotions from the beginning to the end.
Very touching poem, filled with tones of deep darkness and sadness.
You should correct copy/ paste error in the fifth stanza.
All in all, greatly done. The flow is also good from the beginning to the end.
Powerful piece.
Keep writing!

Another great piece. and the emotion was
very intense, i love it. a very attention
grabbing poem, for me, from start to finish.
:] and your choice was words were outstanding.
a truly amazing write! :] 5/5.

Truly amazing ^^ the person above said it all. it flows really well, great job, wish i could write like you lol :) 5/5

Wow,ur poems are great