Enchantingly beautiful Quatern, truly greatly written from the beginning to the end. I like the imagery that you created, it is so vivid. Your descriptions are so fantastic, I'm unable to express how much I enjoyed in this piece.
My favorite stanza is:

- The cinders of love's great fire fall as
Light green sparkles of pixie dust
Illuminating the night with desire
A scented culmination of lust-
^^^
Breathtaking!

Keep writing!
5/5 from me