Comments : Light Green Sparkles of Pixie Dust (Quatern)

  • 12 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Enchantingly beautiful Quatern, truly greatly written from the beginning to the end. I like the imagery that you created, it is so vivid. Your descriptions are so fantastic, I'm unable to express how much I enjoyed in this piece.
    My favorite stanza is:

    - The cinders of love's great fire fall as
    Light green sparkles of pixie dust
    Illuminating the night with desire
    A scented culmination of lust-
    ^^^
    Breathtaking!

    Keep writing!
    5/5 from me