I love this poem!
I really can relate to it, and yeah it is ironic hey? =)
good job on this one,
take care; amani xox.

It's a very nice poem, and I think you write it good and with a nice flow ^^
continue the good work
Nahina

Nice job on the poem :) i really like the last line it has a really big impact. GrEaT jOb!

Good poem,good flow

Great !

I had to read it twice to understand what you meant by the last two lines because when I write a poem somtimes the last two lines are what I want. so for a second I didnt understand but now I do. lol it was good though I liked it