Omg i love this poem the way you used those metaphors was really great your a good writer oh yeah hope you and justin stay together forever

Hey that was an interesting concept. I'm sure the final product on the canvas wasn't very pretty, but surely it had a lot of meaning behind it.

`tia

I love this poem soo much.. its amazing.. 5/5 :)

The 11th verse, 4th word perhaps you wanted to type "you" insted of "your". After taking time to go through all the poems you've written this year it's my true and pleasing pleasure to let you know that your classic description matched only your talent and creativity. They made me graet in its style and impact.
I like the sentence:
"..The colors explode out of control"

You're amazing <3