Aww, i love it! it's so full of emotion and a sense of mistery, it flows beautifully...keep it up, 5/5
xoxo
~waiting~

This is truly beautiful. great rhythm, and flow which is hard to accomplish!! i like alot!! :):)

Woah. I can't even tell you how much I love this poem... It made my heart flutter a bit. [:

OK!..Good advice..tnx
-kuniko ichijo!

hhehee..bye

Very Good. Love the flow. I see a pattern in your writing. The same long, short lines. I like that style its very nice.

Good work, keep on writing! ;)

I love it duh you put into words what i could no express i lvoe this poem soo mcuh god has greatly gifted yo uwith inspiration and i know one day your hard work will be put to use keep up the good work 5/5

I like this poem even more than the last one i commented only....... love love love it!!!

So beautiful and joyful. !!!! <3

GAH! i left you a crappy comment. ^^^^
lol...jesse...i miiiiiissss seeing you happy like that. this poem is beautiful, and you continue to get better every day...it's ridiculous.