Comments : Societies Secrets

  • 16 years ago

    by Woe

    Really really enjoyed that.. kudos girly... =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Pixxie Rebel

    I love this. It's so true, isn't it funny that we just turn a blind eye to everything?

  • 16 years ago

    by Bekka Smekka

    This is a rare poem telling of a truth that most refuse to belive exists. thanx for writing this!! :):)

  • 16 years ago

    by K3LS3Y

    Wow, i REALLY liked this poem a lot. personally, i havent been through any of those instances (thankfully) but i know people that have been through each one of those crazy times. its really sad that our world is like this, but i guess we just have to make the best of it. great job :-)

  • 16 years ago

    by Lizaveta

    Wow this is amazing

    u created kinda kaleidoscope of different stories

    and it really made me think, why do we prefer to see some "glitter" and decept ourselves instead of coping with these problems

    Truly, this poem is exceptional

  • 16 years ago

    by Liz

    I think our society only keeps secrets bc they are afraid to be looked down on for messing up or having something bad happen to them
    i think people shouldn't be scared of telling their past bc its over now and you cant change whats happened
    but you can talk about it so you dont feel so alone

    i like the poem
    long but good