Comments : Darkness be my Friend

  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Darkness be my friend,
    And I'll be the ghost of you,
    Take my sorrow and my sadness,
    Long before I bid my adieu.

    This was my favorite stanza.
    You have penned a beautiful poem here!

    I once was lost in darkness too until an angel came my way...it never returned to me again!

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 14 years ago

    by David

    This was so so good, gosh. i loved the title, and how your poem was set out, unusual but effective.

    5/5 david

  • 14 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    This is really dark, i hope things are ok with you.

    all the best and take care

  • 13 years ago

    by Cindy

    Sam
    I really missed reading your poems. I have also missed you :) You have done a wonderful job with this. I really relate to so much of the piece.

    Darkness by my friend,
    For the hand of a ghost I am holding,
    Longing to find a love long lost,
    His name I'll forever be calling,

    This stanza really grabbed me.
    Excellent!
    Love Cindy

  • 13 years ago

    by CourtneyLouxxx

    This is gorgeous
    xx

    you've still got is sam