I think i am going to add you to my favorite authors because your poems keep amazing me!
5/5

The ghosts of my past, in choir, they moan
Among them, is my desperate love, too
In the shadows of truth, I hide alone
If there is still hope, it won't be with you

I think rthat this was a great way to end the poem. It really tied everything together for me. It was deep and filled with emotion and seriously almost made me cry! You did fantastic!