Comments : Infused Thoughts...

  • 16 years ago

    by Internal Hatred

    Absolutely loved it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Amazing. Simply amazing.

    "And now I don't know what defines me
    And without you, I see myself as nobody;
    Because together. We are one."

    ^ I absolutely love this stanza. It was so unique and creative.

    As the writer, I'm sure this poem was talking about something in specific for you, but as I was reading, it made me relate to some things as well. Which is why I love it - It allowed me to think. (: Also, I love how you slightly altered the 1st stanza at the end. Creative thinking. ;) Overall: 5.5

    - Steph. <3