This is a really nice poem. if it is about real life you really need to tell her. how do you know that she doesnt feel the same way about you. anyway this is a great poem. 5/5

Kalee

Hmm cale,
this feeling is all to fimiliar
I love and hate it all at once
Some suggestions though
I would not focus on rhyming
if your rhymes aren't perfect
or if there are no rhymes at all
it's okay your poem will still be good
because your forced rhyme is getting
in the way of the beauty in this poem
I like what the poem represents because
everyone can relate
nice poem
5/5
kaila